Nowadays, it is becoming more popular to see animals to be kept in captivity, for instance, the zoo Do the advantage of keeping animal in the zoo outweight the disadvantage?

A
zoo
is still a popular place for people to visit for entertainment and to learn about wild animals. And there is an ongoing debate as to whether to keep animals in zoos bring more benefits or drawbacks to the animals. As for me, I believe
this
has both positive significance and bad influence. On the one
hand, the keeping
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hand, keeping the
wildlife in the
zoo
is to protect endangered species,
such
as Pandas, which have been threatened for many years but protected.
Secondly
, the
zoo
is educational, interesting and fun, the
zoo
is the ideal place to educate and nurture children who love animals.
Thirdly
, they have properly cared for closely monitored and the animal’s health treatment and food are guaranteed.
Besides
, the ecosystem is balanced and biodiversity
On the other hand
, there are many reasons why zoos should be shut down.
Firstly
, even though some species are under threat, there are lots of animals which do not fall into
this
category and who are there just for the entertainment of visitors.
Secondly
, animals are kept in artificial environments, cages with limited space. And animals rely too much on humans, they are under human control, captive animals are gradually domesticated and they lost important survival skills in the natural habitat.
Moreover
, the
zoo
can
also
make a profit from animals.
For example
,
circus animals
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circus, animals
, behind the performance of those spectators, they were badly treated, deprived of their freedom, forced to work continuously for hours and unsecured care conditions In conclusion, I feel that the
zoo
provide
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provides
a valuable service to society and the animal world, as they help to protect many species.
This
outweighs their possible disadvantage as long as they are properly staffed and maintained. And sanction should be imposed
on
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in
cases of animal abuse to make money
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