Recent figures show an increase in violent crime among youngsters under the age of 18. Some psychologists claim that the basic reason for this is that children these days are not getting the social and emotional learning they need from parents and teachers
In the prevailing scenario, crimes are drastically increased all over the world,
this
is due to people valued for money rather than the values and relations. According to me, youngsters are not getting enough support from their parents as well as from the teachers, whereas some adolescents attracted to the bad habits through their friends.
To begin
with, in this
contemporary world, both the parents need to work to get an economical status in the society. So, they don't
have time to check and teach their kids how to behave in the society. For instance
, in the US, most of the people are doing jobs by leaving their children in the baby care centres and they don't
have time to spend with them. Because of that absurd behaviours
can be observed among teens and they don'Suggestion
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understand the moral values.
Moreover
, teachers’ role is very important in a child
's life. They are the key persons in building a society. But nowadays, they are merely teaching the subjects like Mathematics, Science and languages. They have to teach not only academic lessons which are useful for the future career of students but
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students, but
also
the social and emotional qualities need to improve in a child
. For example
, in the developed countries, children are not respecting their teachers. I recently read a news article about a child
; the child
went to school with a gun and shoot a couple of his classmates and a teacher and then
he shot himself and died.
However
, adolescents also
are getting attracted to their friends without any knowledge of the moral values. They don't
understand what is right and what is wrong. So, they are getting addicted to bad habits like drugs, smoking and spoiling their lives. In fact, during my secondary education, a person had a habit of smoking, and he encouraged other persons and some people learnt that habit. Sometimes without
their knowledge, they get addicted to other people's bad habits.
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