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Islip
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town
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centre
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includes
also
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its current situation and plans for its
future
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development. Focusing on the
first
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map, it is about the current
centre
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of
Islip
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township. On the northern side of the village, the main roadway is passing and the line of the shops situated, along with each other on the sides of the main roads. There are total 16 shops, 6 of them are on the one side of the main road and reaming are on the opposite side of it. The housing
area
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of the local community is on the southern
part
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as well as on the
centre
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of the
town
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. In the eastern sector of the
Islip
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village, there is one
park
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for children and it is connected with the main road by the small street. The
school
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is located on the southern
part
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of the
town
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and it
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connected with the main road. Discussing the details about the
future
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plan development of the Lslip
town
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, the dual carriageway will construct around the
centre
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of the
town
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. In the northern
part
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of the small
town
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, on the place of some shops, the bus station, a shopping
centre
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and a car
park
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will be developed. Along with the car
park
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, the new housing
area
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will construct and connecting with the dual carriageway. Some shops remain same as in the present. On the southern-eastern
part
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of the
town
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, another new housing
area
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will be built and the
area
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of the
park
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will reduce. On the southern
part
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of the
Islip
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, the place of
school
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will not change, but the building of the
school
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will expand. Some residential
area
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will develop after the
school
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. So, many new facilities will develop in the
Islip
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town
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centre
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in
future
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. Overall, it is observed that in the
Islip
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town
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centre
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, much less facilities are available
in
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at
the present time.
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, in the
future
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development plan, there will many new public facilities develop,
suchsuch
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such such
as bus stations, shopping
centre
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, car
park
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and many more.
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