Some people think that the range of technology currently available is increasing the gap between rich people and poor people. Others think that it is causing the opposite effect. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Technology
is ubiquitous nowadays. We are now in the world of
new millennium
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the new millennium
a new millennium
, travelling
in
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at
with
the maddening speed on the Internet
superhighway
which is the result of the new era of
technology
and new age. Apparently,
this
new phenomenon has made an adverse effect and impact towards our life and the importance of
technology
can never be stressed enough. Given the centrality of the issue, it is high time we discussed the outcome bring by
technology
on whether it is increasing of decreasing the gap between the prosperous man or the pauper. Nothing can detract from the central fact that the
technology
is improving every day, every
minutes
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minute
even every
seconds
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second
. These inventions of scientists often cost a high value. For
instances
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instance
, the AI cleaning robot and the vacuum robot
Dyson who
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Dyson, who
take
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takes
over the duty of a housemaid to alleviate their burden. Apparently, these robots cost a high amount of
money which
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money, which
the poor can’t afford it and the possession of
such
high
technology
seems to be a symbol of the wealthy man nowadays.
Furthermore
, the high-tech machines in
company
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the company
a company
who grab the opportunities of the
workers
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worker's
workers'
job make them unemployed as the machines have a higher efficiency than mankind
thus
this
leads to the situation which is the rich gets richer, the poor gets poorer.
However
, things have its two sides of
coins
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the coins
. The emerging
technology
is indeed decreasing the gap between the rich and the poor. Before the advent of computers and modern
technology
, people communicate over long distances using traditional methods
such
as letter and text messages which costs so high. Now, we have a vast array of communication tools
such
as mobile phones which can more easily complete
this
task and it is accessible. No matter how old or young we are, it is rampant to see that everyone has their own mobile phones and it is the trend now.
Thus
, the latest information can be received by the poor too, and they even use the phones to earn money
such
as being a
Youtuber
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YouTube
or a blogger. To put it laconically,
technology
has its benefits and drawbacks to every human all around the globe.
However
, we have to use it in a right way as it may be the most powerful weapon to destroy
relationship
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the relationship
relationships
between humans.
However
,
technology
is indeed the most influenced inventions in the world and we hope to have more modern
technology
to be invented to help us in our life.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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