High-rise buildings destroy the character of a city. Not only should new ones be banned but existing ones should be demolished and replaced with smaller buildings. To what extent do you agree? Use examples from your own knowledge and experience.

While many people believe that the
character
of a
city
has been destroyed by having a lot of skyscrapers, I disagree with
this
point because advanced techniques in construction can preserve traditional
culture
.
Also
, the
character
of a
city
does not always represent by concrete materials. The
first
point to consider is that modern design
buildings including
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buildings, including
high-rise skyscrapers can be combined with traditional
culture
and
character
. The advanced of technologies in various aspects
such
as architecture, raw materials, and construction provide ability to preserve
culture
for a skyscraper.
For example
, there is a high-rise hotel building in Thailand
that is
constructed
by
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of
multiple pieces of glass to make it as a shape of a traditional Thai greeting posture called “Wai”.
This
is a great example which demonstrated how a skyscraper can preserve
culture
. High-rise buildings do not destroy the
character
of a
city
.
Instead
, it helps
retaining
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retain
culture
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the culture
and acts as a bridge between vintage and modern
culture
. Another consideration is that the
character
of a
city
could come from the people in that
city
. It does not always come from materials
such
as skyscrapers. Fundamentally, we need a proper definition of
character
.
This
can be a lifestyle of people
such
as busy, polite, lazy, calm, and other behaviours. The best example of
this
is Ho Chi Minh
city
in Vietnam where there are plenty of old-style small buildings and high-rise buildings situate together.
However
, the local people are still using motorbikes as a primary method of transportation as well as
this
city
still has
heavy number
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a heavy number
of motorbikes.
This
instance illustrates us that the
character
of a
city
does not always come from concrete materials, so, having more skyscrapers does not always
mean losing of
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mean losing
the
character
of a
city
. In conclusion, I disagree that having more high-rise buildings will ruin the traditional
culture
and the
character
of a
city
. They can be represented from other aspects
such
as people, environment and lifestyle which are not relevant to concrete materials
such
as buildings at all.
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