Nowadays children are being encouraged to use computers and digital media to enhance their learning. Discuss the Advantages and disadvantages of this concept

modern world

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the modern world

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digital discipline and electronic media is an important part of our growth especially for the improvement. I agree that the learning skill of our youngsters can be improved using online training and we should promote the

same but

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same, but

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the same time, there are few negative effects as well.

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essay dwells to explain the benefits and effects for digital learning in below paragraphs.

To begin

with

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there are several advantages to provide learning with the help of technology.

First

and most important, children absorb anything easily using digital platform.

Furthermore

, they can study multiple languages and

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a number

of different countries, cultures using internet and social media. Nowadays

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most of the school and universities were encouraging and already started

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with

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the adoption

of online platforms for teaching. For exemplifying that, children easily memorize their poems and rhymes using mobile or tablets.

On the other hand

, if it is not used in the proper way of without the supervision of parents and teachers, there would be a horrendous effect on our teenager life.

Also

, the excessive use of the Web Wide Web and social networking sites can cause the health issues as well.

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, without proper guidance to use of technology, the young generation might be involved in awful activities. To illustrate

this

point, there are lots of bad contents available over the Internets and that can impact of the life of children and behaviours. To sum up, digital use of learning for our children are very beneficial and strength the ability, but it should be used adequately

otherwise

it would be a disaster for your their career and life as well.

Submitted by Mohammad JAFAR RAZA on Sat Jul 11 2020

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Topic Vocabulary:

digital literacy
multimedia content
flexible and comprehensive education
interactive learning
knowledge retention
over-reliance
traditional learning skills
screen time
health impacts
cybersecurity risks
digital divide
inappropriate content
supervised learning

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