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Nowadays children are being encouraged to use computers and digital media to enhance their learning. Discuss the Advantages and disadvantages of this concept

#children #computers #media #concept
In
modern world
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the modern world
,
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,
digital
education
 and electronic media is
important part
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an important part
 of our
life
 especially for the
education
. I agree that the learning skill of our youngsters can be improved using online
education
 and we should promote the
same but
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same, but
on
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at
 the same time, there are few negative effects as well.
This
 essay dwells to explain the benefits and effects for digital learning in below paragraphs.
To begin
 with
,
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,
there are several advantages to provide
education
 with the help of technology.
First
 and most important, children absorb anything easily using digital platform.
Furthermore
, they can study multiple languages and
number
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a number
 of different
countries cultures
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countries, cultures
 using internet and social media. Nowadays
,
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,
most of the school and universities
are encouraging
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were encouraging
 and already started to
use
 of
online platform
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online platforms
 for teaching. For
exemplifies
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exemplifying
 that, children easily memorize their poems and rhymes using mobile or tablets.
On the other hand
, if it is not used in
proper way
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the proper way
a proper way
 of without
supervision
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the supervision
 of parents and teachers, there would be
horrendous effect
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a horrendous effect
 on our teenager
life
.
Also
, the excessive
use
 of
Web Wide Web
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the Web Wide Web
 and social networking sites can cause the health issues as well.
Moreover
, without proper guidance to
use
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the use
 of technology,
young generation
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the young generation
 might be involved in awful activities. To illustrate
this
 point, there are lots of bad contents available over the Internets and that can impact of the
life
 of children and
behaviors
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviours
. To sum up, digital
use
 of learning for our children are very beneficial and strength the
ability but
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ability, but
 it should be used adequately
otherwise
 it would be
disaster
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a disaster
 for your their career and
life
 as well.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • digital literacy
  • multimedia content
  • flexible and comprehensive education
  • interactive learning
  • knowledge retention
  • over-reliance
  • traditional learning skills
  • screen time
  • health impacts
  • cybersecurity risks
  • digital divide
  • inappropriate content
  • supervised learning
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