It is necessary for parents to attend a parenting training course to bring their children up. Do you agree or disagree?
nowadays
, people consider. Suggestion
Nowadays
that
acceptance adverse case is Suggestion
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a
optimal choice. While some believe that making an effort and dealing with the positive bad situations which is the best route to change your Suggestion
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life
. I partly subscribe to the latter.
Use synonyms
To begin
with, there are Linking Words
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reasons why change is risky and sometimes it is against your massive effort. (used with count nouns) of an indefinite number more than 2 or 3 but not many
several
For example
, Linking Words
i
n the epidemic of refers to the speaker or writer
I
coronavirus
, Suggestion
a
enormous number of Suggestion
an
peole
have put out of work so they (plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
can not
make ends meet for their can not
cannot
life
and family. It is evidence that your unsatisfactory is vital in the period of time. Use synonyms
Moreover
, if someone seeks different job, there is no Linking Words
assure
that the new Suggestion
assuring
ob
can make you more satisfactory. It is obvious that sometimes acceptance is the favourable choice.
On the one hand, the principal activity in your life that you do to earn money
job
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
sppose
those who make a determined attempt to move up in express a supposition
suppose
life
Use synonyms
therefor
the most compelling Suggestion
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rational
is having advantageous (law) an explanation of the fundamental reasons (especially an explanation of the working of some device in terms of laws of nature)
rationale
liife
. There is no doubt that those who strongly believe that a characteristic state or mode of living
life
onedat
they can obtain the objectives to make their lives better. To illustrate my point, if Edison believed that he could not do anything by his teacher said, we would not have the greatest inventions Suggestion
one that
one dat
one day
such
as the light bulb or the phonograph up to now. Thanks to never give up and striving to better situations, we can see a tremendous amount of people achiving extraodinary success like Beethoven the German well-known composer and the pianist owned the top songs in the history of the music in the world or Le Cong a Linking Words
first
Vietnamese person who has the disability tried hard to get the gold medal in Paralympic.
In conclusion, Linking Words
instead
of avoiding risks, striving to change your Linking Words
life
is paved the way for Use synonyms
ner
of a female
her
live
. Not only it can make you have new Suggestion
life
Use synonyms
life but
Accept comma addition
life, but
also
does it help you to discover your potential. Linking Words
Although
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somtimes
, changing is quite dangerous and acceptance is a beneficial decision.on certain occasions or in certain cases but not always
sometimes
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