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It is necessary for parents to attend a parenting training course to bring their children up. Do you agree or disagree?

#parents #course #children
nowadays
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Nowadays
, people consider.
that
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That
 acceptance adverse case is
a
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an
 optimal choice. While some believe that making an effort and dealing with the positive bad situations which is the best route to change your
life
. I partly subscribe to the latter.
To begin
 with, there are
sevral
(used with count nouns) of an indefinite number more than 2 or 3 but not many
several
 reasons why change is risky and sometimes it is against your massive effort.
For example
,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 n the epidemic of
coronavirus
,
a
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an
 enormous number of
peole
(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
 have put out of work so they
can not
can not
cannot
 make ends meet for their
life
 and family. It is evidence that your unsatisfactory is vital in the period of time.
Moreover
, if someone seeks different job, there is no
assure
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assuring
 that the new
ob
the principal activity in your life that you do to earn money
job
 can make you more satisfactory. It is obvious that sometimes acceptance is the favourable choice. On the one hand,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
sppose
express a supposition
suppose
 those who make a determined attempt to move up in
life
therefor
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there for
 the most compelling
rational
(law) an explanation of the fundamental reasons (especially an explanation of the working of some device in terms of laws of nature)
rationale
 is having advantageous
liife
a characteristic state or mode of living
life
. There is no doubt that those who strongly believe that
onedat
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one that
one dat
one day
 they can obtain the objectives to make their lives better. To illustrate my point, if Edison believed that he could not do anything by his teacher said, we would not have the greatest inventions
such
 as the light bulb or the phonograph up to now. Thanks to never give up and striving to better situations, we can see a tremendous amount of people achiving extraodinary success like Beethoven the German well-known composer and the pianist owned the top songs in the history of the music in the world or Le Cong a
first
 Vietnamese person who has the disability tried hard to get the gold medal in Paralympic. In conclusion,
instead
 of avoiding risks, striving to change your
life
 is paved the way for
ner
of a female
her
live
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life
. Not only it can make you have new
life but
Accept comma addition
life, but
also
 does it help you to discover your potential.
Although
somtimes
on certain occasions or in certain cases but not always
sometimes
, changing is quite dangerous and acceptance is a beneficial decision.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • parenting training
  • child-rearing
  • valuable guidance
  • effective techniques
  • child development
  • psychology
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