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People often find it difficult to adapt to new situations in their lives. Why do you think this is? What measures can you suggest to make it easier?

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Nearly, 30 years ago when
Soviet Union
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the Soviet Union
 is crashed, born new 15 independent countries.
This
 time had been heavy to the
government
 and citizens of these countries.Changing of
economic
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the economic system
economic systems
system
 from Socialism to Capitalism, make instability in economics and was the main cause of USSR crash. Not only changing of
economic
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the economic system
system
 was the main problem, but
also
government
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a government
governments
 that can not transformed economics smoothly.
For example
, smoothly economic transform made People's Republic of China that transformed their
economics
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economic
system
 step-by-step.After fairly
economics reform
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economics, reform
economic reform
economic economic reform
 Chinese
government
 choice the way of Industrialization and opened the borders for foreign investors.
In contrast
,
Soviet Union
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the Soviet Union government
government
 made changes very fast and result become the crash of the big country.Citizens felt problems with work, when a lot of people fired from their work.
Although
,
many of people could
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many people could
 adapt to
this
 new and hard
situation
, but a lot of people could not adapt to
this
 hard
situation
 and become homeless or addicted to the alcohol or drugs.
However
, in
this
 new situations
,
Accept space
,
 people who adapt to the new law opened their business or become a little dealers.Big corporations that trade to
abroad
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a broad
 minerals and most of
this
 was Oil a lot of
independent countries
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the independent countries
 of
Soviet Union
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the Soviet Union
 become “addicted to Oil”.
This
 problem born, when other industry
of
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on
 economics
don’t improve
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doesn’t improve
 and country
live
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is living
 just oil trade.I think
this
situation
 with economics influenced to citizens and become new barriers
for
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to
 adaptation.
In
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At
 that
moments
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moment
 we can see that people can’t fast or even just adapt to
new
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new situations
the new situation
a new situation
situation
. To summarize
,
Accept space
,
all causes starts from economic
system
 changes and Oil addicted of these countries become a good example.
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