Some people use social media to keep in touch with other people and news events. Do you think advantages of this technology outweigh the disadvantages?
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Despite the drawbacks below, I believe that social media is extremely useful for human being. These days, on social media sites, It is exceedingly easy to keep in touch with friends and family, anywhere in the whole Suggestion
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, students opt admission in various colleges or universities, in different cities or abroad and in student life, it's immensely tough to cope up with an unacquainted culture and places, Linking Words
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, people can send friend request to anyone through social media and get quickly mingle up with new people of several other backgrounds and culture. Linking Words
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it is astonishing to well familiar with daily news of the nation or the other foreign country.
Admittedly, there are some issues involving when people excessively use these social networking sites. One concern is that it could affect personal or social relationships of people. For an example, when people spend their large amount of free time on chatting with other people Suggestion
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