As countries develop, more and more people buy and use their own cars. Do the advantages of this trend for individuals outweigh the disadvantages for the environment?
Nowadays, because of the
development
of technology and countries, production of cars have grown
dramatically and people buy and use their personal vehicles which caused some critical issues regarding the Suggestion
has grown
enviroment
. Traffic jams caused by the totality of surrounding conditions
environment
large
Suggestion
the large amount
a large amount
amount
of cars in the cities have led to massive air pollution which
thread the future of the planet earth. Accept comma addition
pollution, which
This
essay will argue that advantages of mass production of cars which led to easier
Suggestion
an easier life style
easier lifestyle
the easier life style
life
style doesn't outweight
the be heavier than
outweigh
disavantages
for the the quality of having an inferior or less favorable position
disadvantages
enviorment
.
Industrial the totality of surrounding conditions
environment
development
had major effect
on human Suggestion
a major effect
life
. Internet connection, medical progress and enhancement of transportation are some of examples of new life style
which is caused by modern technology. a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes
lifestyle
Today almost
every household has at least one car which makes Accept comma addition
Today, almost
travels
much easier. Meanwhile, Suggestion
travel
industrialiation
has many negative outcomes as well.
the development of industry on an extensive scale
industrialization
industrialisation
Firstly
, indusrial
of or relating to or resulting from industry
industrial
development
Accept comma addition
development, such
such
as mass production of cars has caused golbal
warming which has a huge impact on human involving the entire earth; not limited or provincial in scope
global
life
and other creatures. The future of our planet is at risk because of grownig
Suggestion
the growing amount
growing amount
amount
of air and water pollution. Many animal
are in danger of becoming Suggestion
animals
instict
and a large amount
of jungles have been wipped
out to build houses and factories. rub with a circular motion
wiped
ripped
Secondly
, this
large amount
of car
the work of providing treatment for or attending to someone or something
care
have led
to traffic Suggestion
has led
jams spacially
in rush hours where everyone is in Accept comma addition
jams, especially
jams especially
hurry
to get to work. It has caused a lot of accidents and had huge effects Suggestion
a hurry
of
human health, both physically and mentally.
In conclusion, Suggestion
on
development
of Suggestion
the development
indusrties
helped human kind in some the people or companies engaged in a particular kind of commercial enterprise
industries
levels but
it can be problematic and it can cause issues regarding the Accept comma addition
levels, but
enviorment
. I believe the totality of surrounding conditions
environment
this
new trend which everyone has a private car can have major and unretivable
effects on out planet and should be re-consider.Submitted by zahra rahimi on
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