5) Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?

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It is always believed that the way of dressing signifies

people

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person's

peoples'

peoples

opinion or their

personality

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. I completely disagree with

this

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view and think choice of clothing

dose

mature female of mammals of which the male is called 'buck'

does

not give information about people.

Firstly

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, clothing is irrelevant by people ‘s

personality

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. It is many different reasons

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for

having some kinds of clothes on. Specifically, nowadays that there is an unwritten united dressing code for some places that are believed either by society or is written by the law.

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, uniforms

that

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are

compulsory to be worn by staff at workplace white uniform for doctors and navy for police officers.

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, wearing suits and formal clothes

are

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very common at professional places or wedding parties.

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, there is not any sign to recognise people’s cultures or their background as they look the same in most cases.

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, clothes used to be selected according to cultures and traditions. People’s mindsets and opinion

has been changing

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have been changing

a lot, which they become

fan

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fans

of fashion that offers them comfortability.

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, people are wearing more casual

such

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as jeans and tops, no matter where they come from.

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, some colours are used to be used for

specific gender

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a specific gender

or ages in some traditional views whereas colours are neutral now. Women, men, young and old wear any colours with no limitation and believing any tradition.

That is

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why predicting

people culture

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people, culture

and

personality

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is not possible by the way they look. In conclusion, I strongly believe that culture and

personality

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can not

cannot

be guessed from

people

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peoples'

clothes.

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

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Topic Vocabulary:

garments
traditional attire
sartorial choices
expressive style
cultural identity
psychological implications
non-verbal cues
globalization
perceptions
professional demeanor
societal norms
economic constraints
subcultures
fashion movements
individualism
stereotype

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