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According to a recent study, the more time people use the Internet, the less time they spend with real human beings. Some people say that instead of seeing the Internet as a way of opening up new communication possibilities world wide, we should be concerned about the effect this is having on social interaction. How far do you agree with this opinion?

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Ever since the advent of
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internet
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the internet
, a new era of communications
began
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has begun
.
Although
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internet
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the internet
 has removed the
communication
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bariers
a structure or object that impedes free movement
barriers
barrier
, it
also
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deminished
impaired by diminution
diminished
diminishes
 the time spent on interpersonal interactions. In my opinion,
face
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 to
face
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communication
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 is heavily impacted by the
communication
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 through the
internet
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.
First
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 and foremost, the online
communication
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 is far more convenient. The users do not need to move in order to meet in person other individuals, including friends and family members. The
internet
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 made it easy to come in touch with others,
overcomming
win a victory over
overcoming
 geographical barriers. In fact, the
internet
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 users got accustomed to the quick and easy online
communication
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 so that the interpersonal interactions were neglected.
For instance
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, chatting through the social media
such
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 as
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Facebook
 and
viber
a slender and greatly elongated substance capable of being spun into yarn
fibre
vibe
 has significantly replaced the
face
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 to
face
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 meetings especially among the youths.
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Internet
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The internet
 has become an
intregral
existing as an essential constituent or characteristic
integral
 tool of
communication
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 and one need to look far to find problems associated with it.
However
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, expanding the
communication
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 boundaries and increasing the time consumed in
such
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 activity, make the
internet
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 users more inept at interpersonal
communication
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.
As a result
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, people become alienated with each other and depressed.There are examples of young individuals that prefer to chat with their
aquaintances even
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acquaintances, even
acquaintances even
acquaintance even
 if they live close to each other. In sum, the
internet
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 made
communication
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 more efficient and advanced.
Although
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 there are many advantages with the online
communication
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, there are
also
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 drawbacks related to lack of interpersonal interactions.
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