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Spoken communication is more powerful than written communication”. Do you agree or disagree?

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Communication is the fundamental requirement in human life. Over the years, communication has evolved widely. English has become
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 of the most spoken languages in the entire world. Some people believe that verbal communication is better than written communication. I agree with the former statement, I’ll shed some light on my views in the upcoming paragraphs. From my understanding, Spoken communications could be either a
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 to
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 engagement physically or over the phone. Face to face meetings can save relationships in
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 modern era. Whether, it’s a teenage girlfriend- boyfriend or a middle - age couple or couple in their old age, sorting problems while looking at each other and understanding each others emotions is easy,
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 researcher said. To explain, the psychology behind it is that your pitch and the emotion we put in speech is 70% more effective than writing someone and
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 could have a better understanding of your vantage point.
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, when a parent writes
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 a text, “I am really disappointed, I want to talk to you”. Now the kid on the other end could perceive it as something they have done wrong and are going to be punished by their parents.
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 misunderstanding could lead to some other serious issues, In order to escape the punishment the kid might try to run away or attempt to do something obscene. So, pitch in
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 conversation plays a huge role. In retrospect, Parent might be just having a rough day at work and just wanted to take their kids advice on the issue, but in any situation a simple text like that could be misinterpreted.
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 to it, with the evolution of words and acronyms parents and grandparents can hardly understand what their teenage kid is trying to say- a survey said. In conclusion, I understand that in testing sometime is the quickest way possible, but I believe where possible a person should try to communicate verbally, it could save someone hours of anxiety and frustration.
Submitted by Kamini Nayyar on

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