Some people say that children should stay in school until the age of 18. Others suggest that educating children until the age of 14 is enough. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people believe that children should stay in

school

until they are 18 years old.

however

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However

, others think that, 14

age

is enough to study.

Although

there exist strong arguments on both sides here. I think the

first

one is a better option . From one angle, he can finish

school

at the

age

of 14, get a job faster, earn

money

and start his own life.

This

may be true in

minds

Suggestion

the minds

of some people because they do not spend extra

money

and time on higher

education

,

instead

they earn

money

by working and

thus

they serve as a source of funding for their family. Today higher

education

requires a lot of

money

and not everyone can afford it. Perhaps it is precisely

this

problem

that is

causing him to drop out of

school

at the

age

of 14 years. From another angle, young people who have graduated from high

school

and have a higher

education

face almost no difficulty in finding a job in the future, and they are usually offered high-paying jobs. I

also

fully agree with

this

opinion and consider

this

to be correct. I can cite a few examples to prove

this

point:

for example

According to a survey of developed countries, 98% of people with a higher

education

degree live a prosperous life.

Moreover people

Accept comma addition

Moreover, people

who invest in themselves to study become financially independent in a very short period of time. In conclusion, there may be good aspects to graduating from

school

at the

age

of 14, but it is still better to continue

education

until

Suggestion

to

have a higher

education

.