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Caring for children is probably the most important job in any society. Because of this, all mothers and fathers should be required to take a course that prepares them to be good parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

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, I completely disagree with the idea that we should force all mothers and fathers to attend parenting courses. In my opinion, the idea that in the future, all parents have to attend the preparation course which can help them have the basic skills to take their children is completely impractical. Most people have their jobs and busy schedules, that make people to achieve their prospects, so it is hard to force all parents who will not be willing to attend courses. At the same time, the regulation would raise the new question that whether those who missed the classes or refused to attend, would be punished. To me, I believe that to force all parents to follow the rule is ridiculous, not all families have the same resources for their children, so we should not make a compulsory course to regulate parents. By the way, it’s hard to make a regulation
that is
 agreed by all people and suitable for all people, so I believe that training courses for parents are unnecessary. Mothers and fathers have been raising children without any formal help or official interference for thousands of years. Most parenting skills are learned from family members, friends, neighbours, and the surrounding culture.
Although
 the pieces of information maybe are not correctly, I believe that it is the reason why everyone is special in the world. In conclusion, while compulsory parenting lessons might seem like a good idea, I believe that
such
 a scheme would be unworkable and largely pointless.
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