the charts below show the results of a survey on happiness ratings for married and unmarried people in the US and the effect of children on the overall rating of married couples.
The charts below illustrate the comparable percentage of obtaining pleasure between two
groups
of single and unmarried people and the range of happiness into
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for
couples
who has children
in the US.
According to
the first chart
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couples
with four distinct types of years
are happier than four kinds years
old singles. The amount of enjoyment Change preposition
of years
has
fluctuated between 40 and 45. The 18 - 29, almost 30-49 and 65 and over Unnecessary verb
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years
old groups
experience the most significant percentage of satisfying
which are approximately 45 and 44 respectively.Replace the word
satisfaction
While
the first three groups
of singles in comparison with the married have the lowest percentage which is between 21 and 22. Although
the satisfying
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satisfaction
of
life for unmarried, who Change preposition
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is
65 and over has significant changes that are around 34 Correct subject-verb agreement
are
percent
.
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per cent
couples
who have children
younger than 18 years
old are happier than the other 2 groups
that have only and over 18 children
and no children
. The first stage comes back to the people by
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a
youth under 18 Correct article usage
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years
, second
to who
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those who
doesn't
have a youngster and the Correct subject-verb agreement
don't
third
belongs to couples
with 18 years
and only a youngster. Totally having a child decrease
the happiness of life for Correct subject-verb agreement
decreases
couples
in comparison with two
charts.
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the two
Overall
, the chart's concept married
people, whether they bring Change preposition
of married
children
or are not happier than unmarried groups
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