People generally know that the environment is important. However, most individuals still don't take responsibilities to protect the environment. Why is this? What should be done to encourage people to protect the environment? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

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The earth
is our home and it is our
responsibility
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to protect our home. The sooner we realise
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, the better and healthier we would be. Some people usually tend to ignore
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responsibility
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due to
sheorance
a pain that is felt (as when the area is touched)
soreness
, while others do it due to lack of awareness. A lot of people know
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very well, but usually the thought ‘what difference can I make alone’, deters them from doing
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diligently. It would require continuous efforts of everyone to save
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planet.
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and foremost, it is important to raise awareness and educate people about the benefits of protecting the
environment
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. Starting right from early education for children.
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, Schools now days are teaching the
children their
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children, their
responsibilities towards the
environment
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. Schools have started making kids do projects on
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the environment
and to embolden
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thought have started celebrating the ‘
environment
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day’. Due to
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increasing awareness in the children they have been observed checking adults when they see them polluting or littering. While some people are unaware when it comes to their
responsibility
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towards the
environment
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, others are plain simple ignorant and do not care. These are the people who usually only understand by authority. It is high time that stricter punishments and penalties should be levied on people who harm the
environment
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.
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, In India a lot of people are seen
littering
be about
loitering
on the streets, but the same people when travelling abroad do not dare to litter due to the heavy penalties and fines.
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definitely pushes them in the right direction. To conclude, I believe It is imperative that everyone realises their
responsibility
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towards the
environment
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and start doing their bit.

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