People think that some countries can be both economically successful and clean their environment, whereas some of them disagree. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement
People
think that some countries can be both Use synonyms
econoomically
successful and clean their environment, Correct your spelling
economically
whereas
some of them disagree. To what extent do you agree or disagree with Linking Words
this
statement It is Linking Words
pervasive
stereotype that economic and Add an article
a pervasive
finantial
success in a Correct your spelling
financial
country
is proportional to Use synonyms
Correct article usage
the countrie’s
countrie’s
Correct your spelling
country’s
tideness
. Normally Correct your spelling
tidiness
tides
people
imagine Use synonyms
of
very Change preposition
apply
magnificant
Correct your spelling
magnificent
city
in Use synonyms
developed
Add an article
a developed
country
. Meanwhile, when Use synonyms
people
normally think of developing countries, some untidiness image comes to mind. Use synonyms
Overall
Linking Words
this
writing will deal with Linking Words
other perspective
the development and the Change the wording
another perspective
other perspectives
cleaness
of the Correct your spelling
cleanness
clearness
city
. First of all, many splendid Use synonyms
city
which is known Use synonyms
as
success Change preposition
for
at
their economic state Change preposition
in
such
as New Linking Words
york
, Paris, London, Beijing ..Capitalize word
York
ect
is very far from Correct your spelling
etc.
cleaness
. Correct your spelling
clean
It’s
magnitude of economic value is leading Replace the word
Its
however
poverty and Linking Words
dirtyness
Correct your spelling
dirtiness
is
overshaded in the capital cities. Correct subject-verb agreement
are
Presumably
there are uncleaned Add a comma
Presumably,
area
or even tourist Fix the agreement mistake
areas
attraction
Fix the agreement mistake
attractions
Correct pronoun usage
that area
area
Correct your spelling
are
is
not well managed. Unnecessary verb
apply
Overall
no where is Linking Words
tide
seemingly regardless of their economic magnitude whether Correct your spelling
tied
Use synonyms
city
is developed or underdeveloped. It is Add an article
the city
a city
avoidable
matter of untidiness , no at least Add an article
an avoidable
cleanesss
. The reason Correct your spelling
cleaners
of
Change preposition
for
untidiness
of Correct article usage
the untidiness
capital
Correct article usage
the capital
city
could vary, Use synonyms
however
in general the strict rule could not be applied to Linking Words
citizen
. Contrary to most developed capital, Singapore Fix the agreement mistake
citizens
Linking Words
that
is Correct pronoun usage
which
Use synonyms
city
Correct article usage
a city
country
Use synonyms
have
strictly legislated Change the verb form
has
law
for Fix the agreement mistake
laws
people
. Use synonyms
For
Linking Words
instance
spitting is banned in Add a comma
instance,
this
Linking Words
country
and the government charge Use synonyms
the
fine in Correct article usage
a
this
case. So contrary to Linking Words
other
Change the wording
another city
other cities
city
Singapore could maintain Use synonyms
clean
environment. Add an article
a clean
Furthermore
, all economically developed countries allow millions of Linking Words
traveller
who do not follow basic Fix the agreement mistake
travellers
rule
regarding Fix the agreement mistake
rules
cleaness
. Mostly it is reported that the tremendous Correct your spelling
cleanliness
trash
is illegally left by anonymous travellers. Meanwhile there is Use synonyms
special
Correct article usage
a special
occation
in South Korea. There haven’t Correct your spelling
occasion
had
Verb problem
been
official
Correct article usage
an official
trash
bin in Use synonyms
this
Linking Words
country
in every street. Some Use synonyms
people
just left domestic Use synonyms
gabage
in the public Correct your spelling
garbage
garage
trash
bin which is free to deal with though. So Use synonyms
that
government at some point haven’t allowed public Correct determiner usage
the
trash
bin at all. Eventually Use synonyms
there
is more serious problem occurs, the Correct pronoun usage
apply
trash
which is supposed Use synonyms
be
Fix the infinitive
to be
at
one place Change preposition
in
scattered
everywhere. There are complicated numerous Add a missing verb
is scattered
reason
why Fix the agreement mistake
reasons
developed
Add an article
the developed
a developed
Use synonyms
country
can not control Fix the agreement mistake
countries
tideness
but Correct your spelling
tidiness
overall
all basic Linking Words
system
can not come up with stunning development Fix the agreement mistake
systems
in addition
to Linking Words
citizen’s
matureness. Fix the agreement mistake
citizens’
Overall
, Linking Words
system
of cleanness is required Add an article
a system
the system
regadless
of rich or poor Correct your spelling
regardless
Use synonyms
country
.Fix the agreement mistake
countries
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