In some countries, owning a home rather then renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this a positive or negative situation? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Owning a

home

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rather than renting

one

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is very important for people in some countries.

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is possibly because it encourages savings, has accrued entitlement benefits and offers

one

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a peace of mind. Apart from the adverse

government

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policies in some countries like revocation of occupancy and indiscriminate taxation, it is a positive situation.

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Owning

home

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can encourage

one

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’s savings

plan

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plan, such

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that in a situation where

one

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has to pay upfront to own the

house

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or by instalment, it instils that discipline of saving in

one

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. If

one

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pays

upfront

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up front

, he will have

one

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les

used to form the comparative of some adjectives and adverbs

less

issues

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issue

to worry about which is

rent

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rented

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, every other earnings could be saved for other projects. Even when

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is paying

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is paid

in instalments, the culture is instilled

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too, such

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that the commitment to offset the bill helps reduce wasteful spending.

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, owning a

house

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has accrued entitlement benefits in some countries.

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such

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compensations

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compensation

benefits in situations where

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government

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the government

take

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takes

over the

property but

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property, but

being a mere tenant of

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property does not attribute

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benefit to

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. There is a peace of mind that comes with owning a

house

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. Issues like eviction notices and threats due to rent expiration does not

bother

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bother with such

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individual as obtains if

one

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is a tenant.

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in some countries,

government

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policies and laws adversely affect

one

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that owns a

home

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. My parents experienced

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when there was a change in

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which came and revoked all occupancy

certificate

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certificate, thus

certificates thus

certificates certificates thus

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making us loose our

house

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only to be battling it in court with the

government

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. After many years of litigation, we recovered our

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house but

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house, but

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it could pose a serious threat to

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’s well-being. There are

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policies like indiscriminate taxation and levies levelled against

house

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owners

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that affects

one

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’s financial plan. In conclusion, owning a

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rather than renting

one

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is very important for people in some countries and I think it is a very positive situation.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.5

Complete response

5.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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326 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

ownership
renting
importance
sense of security
stability
financial investment
asset
customize
decorate
belonging
community
potential
future generations
long-term
cost advantage
control
living space

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