Education abroad is the key factor for becoming successful. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, many people think that studying abroad is the main factor for being successful. To a certain extent, I agree that
education
abroad is significant for success.
Nevertheless
, I
also
believe that some other factors are important for becoming successful as well.
First
of all, I accept that
education
in foreign countries can give us much more knowledge and experience. Each country has its own culture, lifestyle,
education
system and so on. So, we can experience many things that are different in our country and be superior to others.
For example
, you are
more preferable
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most preferable
one for job vacancies if you have studied abroad.
In addition
, I believe that there are other factors for becoming successful as well.
Firstly
, self-improvement can aid us to be successful even if we do not have studied abroad.
For instance
, if you study abroad, but do not develop yourself in your field, you cannot be successful enough or if you do not have studied
abroad but
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abroad, but
have developed yourself, you can be more successful than a person who studied abroad.
Secondly
, practice and experience are much more necessary. People have to practice what they learned. Theoretical parts should be applied
into
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in
real life.
For example
, you have learned many things
abroad but
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abroad, but
you cannot apply them
into
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in
life, that makes your knowledge unnecessary. To sum up, while I admit the
education
abroad is useful for becoming successful, I believe that it is not the most important factor for success. Other factors have more significant roles.
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