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You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter • explain why you want to work in the company's head office for six months • say how your work could be done while you are away • ask for his/her help in arranging it

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Dear Sarah, I am Mitali Shah, working as
Head
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 of the
Audit
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 Department in our
company
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. I am writing
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 letter to ask for your support to my intention of working on
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 project at our
company
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's
Head
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 Office in London. As you know, our
company
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 will be working on
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Audit
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 of the biggest IT
company
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of
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 London and all work will be done from
head
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 office there. I am thrilled to hear about
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 new work as
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 IT
company
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 is the biggest in the market, known for
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 work ethics and efficient strategies to run their finances. As the
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 of
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 Department of our branch, which is
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 the main branch of India, I am eager to devote myself to complete
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 new
head
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 task. Apart from
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, I assure you to not compromise
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 current
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 projects we are working on. My peers and subordinates are extremely hard-working, talented and supportive, too. In case, if any need will arise in future, I will always have their back! I will be obliged if you can help me to get
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 opportunity and look after all necessary formalities so that I can explore my capabilities and elevate the prestige of our
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. Expecting your support and your reply as earliest. Faithfully yours, Mitali M. Shah

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • professional advancement
  • cross-cultural collaboration
  • headquarters/ head office
  • global perspective
  • remote work
  • temporary assignment
  • team dynamics
  • networking opportunities
  • cultural immersion
  • succession planning
  • collaborative tools
  • time zone coordination
  • corporate hierarchy
  • relocation logistics
  • work-life balance
  • multinational environment
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