Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development?

Nowadays when
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Nowadays, when
such
complicated areas as IT and telecommunication methods are developed using the Internet for communicating has become as a new trend.
However
, there is the question which should be answered: is it a positive or a negative development?
This
essay will consider some pros and cons regarding
this
question. These days it is hard or closely impossible to imagine our modern life without using the Global Network: people are spending time in front of computer or smartphone screens chatting with others. Obviously, it seems to be easy to give a call or to send a message to somebody who lives far from us.
In
addition thanks
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addition, thanks
to
such
softs
an optical instrument for aiding the eye in aiming, as on a firearm or surveying instrument
sights
as WhatsApp or Skype we have a great opportunity to make video calls.
Thus
, technologies are intended to serve people; nowadays we can connect with others as promptly as never before. It is believed that the way technologies have affected our lives is a positive development. Obviously, it is needed to give
this
method its due: it is a chance to communicate with others easy that many people adore and appreciate a lot.
On the other hand
, in order to interact with relatives and
friends some
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friends, some
people prefer to use their devices only, forgetting about face-to-face communication.
In other words
, some
softs
make a shift in or exchange of
shifts
sorts
can be very useful for
communication
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communicating
over long
distance but
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distance, but
we are charged to meet with our relatives as well. It is well known that new technologies influence our lives as well as
methods
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the methods
we interact with others. In
conclusion I
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conclusion, I
would like to say that despite of the fact we have a very good opportunity to chat as easily as never before, we should pay attention to so called “face-to-face communication”. As people say, everything is good in moderation.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • technology
  • interact
  • relationships
  • connectivity
  • communication
  • online
  • face-to-face
  • friendships
  • romantic relationships
  • family dynamics
  • positive
  • negative
  • development
  • effects
  • formation
  • ease
  • impacts
  • communities
  • connect
  • interaction
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