Unpaid community service to be included compulsory in the school programs for the children

In the past few
year’s many
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years, many
years many
year many
people have come up with news ideas to serve their country or community, one
such
idea is implementing compulsory unpaid service to the school curriculum. Now,
an
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a
question arose, Is
this
a good idea to make it compulsory
?
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I will discuss both the sides of the arguments and align my views in the following paragraph.
Firstly
, proponents who sided that it is a good idea to include unpaid community service in school compulsory activities, they think it will help the children
at
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in
young age self awareness about the societies current status and problems people are facing on
daily basis
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a daily basis
. It will help them understand the society.
For instance
, many activities like helping poor people
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cleaning up the streets, planting
tress
a tall perennial woody plant having a main trunk and branches forming a distinct elevated crown; includes both gymnosperms and angiosperms
trees
, arranging awareness rallies for some good cause will make children socially active and helps develop
team work
cooperative work done by a team (especially when it is effective)
teamwork
, leadership qualities. All
this
qualities
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quality
may not be
usefull
being of use or service
useful
in improving the academic
area but
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area, but
it
definetly
without question and beyond doubt
definitely
builds up the character at
young age
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a young age
. As much as I agree with the view, making it compulsory is a bit harsh on the
schools
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school
children as they already have so much on their plate. Recently, due to growing standards and competitions in the academic field few subjects has been added to their curriculum. So, focusing on the studies is
also
very important and distribution of time for other activities is a difficult task. There are other methods to encourage children for community services, like it can be practiced occasionally. And arranging a small group of children from each school or classes interested can participate, which will increase the number of students. To conclude, despite some advantages, unpaid services should not be a compulsory activity at schools. As their mind is already occupied with the subjects.
Besides
compulsory other methods can be used to
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encourage
children.
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