Some people think that schools have to be more entertaining, while others think that their sole purpose is to educate. Which do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Some parents have a rigid thought process, when it comes to school, to think that children purpose is to attend the school, and only gain
education
, Suggestion
an education
however
, there are people who want their children's school, to be equally entertaining.My personal opinion is that schools should be balanced in terms with education & entertainment.Hence
, I agree with the schools who will provide the equal attention on both the things.
Firstly
, Schools those are focusing to be more enterntaining
agreeably diverting
entertaining
,
will not be Accept space
,
benefical
to the students in the long run.Studies have shown, so many Schools who keeps on charging fees, for so many events and programs, in the name of promoting or enhancing well-being
beneficial
child's development
and grooming of Suggestion
a child's development
the child's development
persoanlity
, but in reality, the complex of all the attributes--behavioral, temperamental, emotional and mental--that characterize a unique individual
personality
its
a it is
it's
lucurative
way to earn money from the innocent parents, who work around the clock, for their children.producing a sizeable profit
lucrative
Also
, many times children get so involved in such
co-curricular activities, that most of the curical
time, get wasted on of extreme importance; vital to the resolution of a crisis
crucial
this
rather than on academics, which is also
an important part of the School's life
.
On the other hand
, if we look at those
Schools, which are purely focused on academics and plural of "this"
these
acheiving
good grades, to gain with effort
achieving
that is
a whole misconception for many parents. Parents cant
be limited by just preparing their children to get good grades, by doing so they will can not
can't
are
hampering their social skills, interpersonal and overall personality, which is Suggestion
be
also
essential part
of their Suggestion
an essential part
life
, and which will be useful in
every stage of their Suggestion
at
life
, fore.g
If a student who is a rank holder in the class, Suggestion
G
however
, not able to speak infront
of the whole class, during Suggestion
in front
a
inter-school competition. It will damage his confidence, and can lead to many other problems at a later stage.
To conclude, equal importance should, be given to both the areas, that are Suggestion
an
Education
and entertainment, to groom the child's overall personality.Suggestion
Educational
Therefore
balanced importance should be given in the educational instituitions
. an organization founded and united for a specific purpose
institutions
institution
In addition
, we can also
see from the thorough studies that implementiong
apply in a manner consistent with its purpose or design
implementing
such
kind of practice, will mould the child to be successfull
in every situation of his having succeeded or being marked by a favorable outcome
successful
life
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