In the future, nobody will buy newspaper or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Future
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The future
will be internet operating technology (IoT) era where all things available on
global virtual cloud
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the global virtual cloud
. Some article states that in
future
no one will buy newspapers or books because
information
will be available on public domain and people can read without paying. I am disagreeing with
statement
Suggestion
the statement
a statement
as need to discuss about the revenue generation for publishers and reliability of free
information
available on
internet
Suggestion
the internet
. In
future
,
earing
earn on some commercial or business transaction; earn as salary or wages
earning
earn
income will be the main topic for newspapers and
books
Suggestion
book
publishers due to increasing in competition. Presently newspaper and books are generating revenue as people are purchasing daily their
articles but
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articles, but
in
future
, if it completely shifted to online reading
then
for them has to depend on income by
advertisement
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an advertisement
which is directly depends
perpax
be a mystery or bewildering to
perplex
browsing
there
of them or themselves
their
portal.
For instance
,
Times
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the Times
of India
earlier allowing
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is earlier allowing
free access through their website or apps, but recently they started monthly charges as purchasing
physical copy
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a physical copy
of
newspaper
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the newspaper
a newspaper
is reduced. Definitely, in
future
all online portals will change for users
for
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to
access
information
. In continuation, always question arise about
trustworthy
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trustworthiness
of
information
available on
internet
Suggestion
the internet
. In Google search engine if you type any
topics
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topics, then
then
will get thousands of related links about
same topic
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the same topic
but true
information
is always doubtful. Many
times partly
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times, partly
information
is available and that portal is not responsible as it is freely available.
For instance
, recent India- China boarder issue, all the online newspapers are providing partial
information
about
situation
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the situation
and
main content
Suggestion
the main content
of the news was missing. All are trying the get
maximum numbers
Suggestion
the maximum amount
maximum amount
of browser with some false or over
hipe
give help or assistance; be of service
help
hip
topic. To conclude, I strongly feel that online
information
about specific things should not be available freely and government should have control
on
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of
them. It is always better to get genuine detail
information
then
part
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partial
information
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Technological advancements
  • Digital content
  • Environmental concerns
  • Tactile experience
  • Production costs
  • Distribution costs
  • Digital divide
  • Digital fatigue
  • Print media
  • Credibility
  • Permanence
  • Collectibility
  • Aesthetic value
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