In some culture, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message.
It is popular among some nations that making children believe that they can do whatever they want, if they
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point of view has its own pros and cons. The advantage is that, Linking Words
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thinking can bring confidence in them and its disadvantage is that they never learn to accept defeat.
Many parents start feeding their kids, Linking Words
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thought, that they can do whatever they want to do. It brings confidence in their child. Linking Words
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kind of encouragement makes them Linking Words
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very hard to achieve their goals. Use synonyms
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, if the child doesn’t hear, that he is capable of doing anything it might discourage him and kill his enthusiasm. Linking Words
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kind of winning attitude makes the child to do something innovative and daring.
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, the message seems very good and it looks it has all the positivity in it, but if not properly communicated, it can be very fatal for the kid’s mental growth. With Linking Words
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eagerness to win all the time, we have to ensure that they know how to cope up with failure. If not, when these kids face a setback they are not able to handle it very well and Linking Words
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hard to win, if face a defeat, can’t accept it and either they stop doing hard Use synonyms
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or start planning a revenge.
To conclude, children become what we teach them to be, Use synonyms
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it is parents’ duty to make them confident enough to Linking Words
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teach them to face a failure. The balance between both these attributes can make their children to be really successful in life.Linking Words
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...