Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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To
live in a foreign country where a native
language
is required to speak can create severe problems both in social and daily life, I completely disagree with
this
view. When someone is living in a country and speaking a native
language
can not cause crucial problems. The
First
reason is, nowadays students who intend to pursue higher study abroad are bound to
fulfill
put in effect
fulfil
the
language
requirements;
otherwise
they will not be qualified to apply in international universities.
Hence for
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Hence, for
having
language
skill, international students can socialise with students as well as capable of following lectures that
reduces
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reduce
the prospects of facing any problems in their lives.
On the other hand
, immigrants who are going to foreign countries get the opportunity of participating
language
courses provided by the government.
For instance
,
United Kingdom
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the United Kingdom
has been providing English
language
course for the newly arrived foreigners: where in Germany many universities have taken initiatives of mandatory six months long intensive German
language
course for the foreign pupils. In foreign
countries people
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countries, people
can face social and practical problems not only for
language
but for other factors as well.
Firstly
, students may pass their
language
tests but if they are not financially affluent or have not secured fully
funded
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funding
funds
scholarships, to cover their living costs and
tution
a fee paid for instruction (especially for higher education)
tuition
fees, will encounter problems to bear their daily expenses and continue their study.
Secondly
, apart from the
cause
an occurrence of something
case
of
language
, religion has already created conflicts and polarisation in different spheres of people's life who are living abroad. As in today's modern world religious extremism and conservative views have reached in an alarming state that people have become susceptible in coping with foreigners' and embracing their customs and cultures. In the long run, because of
this
the social bond in the communities are lessening. In conclusion, nowadays people are aware of the necessity of
language
and
also
acquire skills in foreign
language
as they plan
to live in abroad
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to live abroad
.
Therefore students
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Therefore, students
and immigrants do not face difficulties in a foreign country
for
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in
the
language but
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language, but
mainly for monetary and religious factors. #Cambridge_13 #Task_2
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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