Some people hold the view that a good teacher is more important for education success while others think the student’s attitude is more important to succeed in education. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

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access to qualified teachers since with a proper teaching approach students from different backgrounds can evolve to their highest potential.
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system based on students’ needs and potentials. As a matter of fact, they can develop a learning methodology to cover all of
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, there are some cases that even excellent teachers could not achieve a
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • inspire
  • motivate
  • engaged
  • persist
  • responsibility
  • resources
  • collaborative efforts
  • educational outcomes
  • discipline
  • study habits
  • interdependent
  • individualized support
  • complex concepts
  • overcome challenges
  • receptive student
  • external factors
  • family support
  • peer influence
  • socio-economic status
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