You recently bought something from a TV home shopping channel. The product that was delivered does not have the same specifications / functions as the one advertised on TV. Write a letter to the TV channel. In your letter; Say why and when you bought the item Say what is the difference / what is wrong with it Say what action you would like them to take

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Dear Sir, I am writing

you

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to you

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to complain about the

coffee

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machine

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which I bought after watching your TV advertisement on weekend. I have been a loyal viewer of your TV home shopping channel for 2 years and placed numerous successful orders.

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, I am highly dissatisfied

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the product which I received yesterday on 7th July 2020.

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of all,

model

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the model

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of the

machine

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is not

same

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as it was advertised. I have received an old model

machine

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with a manual timer.

Secondly

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coffee

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the coffee

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machine

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is not

multifunctioned

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multifunctional

multi functioned

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apply

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was mentioned. It can only be used for hot

coffee

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and its cold

coffee

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feature is not working at all.

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, there is some problem

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with

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the mixer. I tried to make

coffee

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with the roasted beans but it was not mixed properly. Due to all these

deficiencies

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I am very disappointed by

this

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product. I would request you either to return me

full

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the full

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purchase price or provide me with the replacement. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully Rabia Yousaf

Submitted by Raia on Wed Jul 15 2020

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

176 words

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