Everyone should become vegetarian because they do not need to eat meat to have a healthy diet. Do agree or disagree?

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Vegeterianism
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Vegetarianism
becomes
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is becoming
more and more popular
at
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as
many people in countries, because they thick that
meat
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is harmful to their body. In my opinion, I strongly believe that it is not essential for people to be a vegetarian. There
are
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is
some reason why
meat
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plays a role in the life. The
first
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reason is that
meat
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contains a large amount of rich source. As a
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a scientist who devotes himself to doing research
researcher
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,
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meat supplies protein which
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the meat supplies protein, which
the meat supplies protein which
helps to build muscles and bones. While the vegetarians consume supplements and vegetables to get all the necessary vitamins and minerals, eating
meat
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is the fundamental way to help people to charge the power.
On the other hand
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, using
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meat
an amphetamine derivative (trade name Methedrine) used in the form of a crystalline hydrochloride; used as a stimulant to the nervous system and as an appetite suppressant
meth
is the habit originating from our
ansectors
someone from whom you are descended (but usually more remote than a grandparent)
ancestors
for
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the cardinal number that is the product of 10 and 100
thousands
thousand's
thousand
of years.
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picking the fruits, they hunted the animals and killed them to eat
meat
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, so we could not ignore and abandon the true rule. It is not to say that
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is a reason causing some people’s health problems.
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, consuming too much
meat
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leading to people would meet the variety of diseases
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as diabetes, obesity, cardiovascular and even cancer.
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, facing to these predicaments, we can limit the figure for the
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eating
everyday
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every day
and combine with others green foods without having diet completely. To sum up, I do not agree that everyone should become to the vegetarian diet.
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the
overconsumption
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of
meat
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could risk for the health, eating a well balanced between
meat
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and vegetable would bring the positive result in a
health
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healthy
healthier
body.
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