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Fossil fuels are essential for producing electricity, powering industry and fueling transportation. However, one day we will reach a point when all the world’s fossil fuels have been depleted. How can we conserve these resources? What are some alternatives to fossil fuels?

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Production of
electricity
, transportation of vehicles are mainly dependent on non renewable fossil fuels, but some day a situation can be reached where there is no more fossil
fuel
 left, to avoid or prolong
this
 process, few conserving techniques have to be adapted and
also
 find other alternatives to fossil
fuel
. The ways in which fossil fuels can be conserved are by avoiding excessive usage of vehicles
for instance
 using public transport or opting for car pooling can save the
fuel
, developing a habit of using bicycle at least once a week and walking a short distance rather than using a vehicle can save
fuel
 as well keep the person fit and healthy. One of my friends who lives close to his office goes to his workplace by walk every day, he uses his vehicle only during family outing.
Electricity
 can be saved by turning off the lights and fans when not in use, which can reduce the need for
electricity
 production
,
Suggestion
, therefore,
, therefore
therefore
therefore
 reducing the consumption of
fuel
.
However few
Accept comma addition
However, few
 alternative sources of fuels could be wind turbines and briquettes to generate
electricity
 that can be used for different engines, namely, Car, Motorbike, Railway engines, Solar
energy
 can
also
 be an excellent alternative which can be utilized for running vehicles and
also
 generate
electricity
.
For example
 a retired army officer built his house and equipped it with solar panels which can generate sufficient
electricity
 that can match the
energy
 requirement of his house and
also
 can replace Liquified petroleum gas with solar
energy
 lit cooking range. To summarise, fossil fuels are widely used for
electricity
 production and transportation, unfortunately these are nonrenewable resources which get depleted over time,
hence
 it is always better to work on the ways to minimise the usage of these
energy
 sources and switch to other methods of
energy
 production.
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