While some people consider global warming to be the most pressing environmental problem which we have at the moment, others believe that deforestation has a more devastating impact on our world. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Nowadays, our planet is facing with vast number of environmental obstacles. The most remarkable of those problems are climate change and forest destruction. some
people
think raising the average temperature of the earth
is the most serious problem of the earth
, while
other people
consider eliminating forests
as the most important problem of our habitat. In my opinion, although
both of these issues should be considered by government authorities and people
as important problems, I believe global warming is more important rather than another one.
There are some people
who argue that global warming should be considered the most hazardous problem for the planet Earth
. With the increase in thermal power and the demand for transportation, a lot of fumes and greenhouse gasses are produced by cars. Hence
, air pollution has risen which can cause serious health problems for every individual. For instance
, ice melting is happening in the Arctic due to
global warming and most of the species in this
place are endangered, therefore
other species are in danger of extinction which can have a huge negative impact on the ecosystem.
On the other hand
, there are some reasons supporting the statement of those people
who believe damaging forests
can have so many negative impacts on the earth
. In this
era, many people
are cutting down trees and clearing forests
in order to utilize wood for construction. In other words, this
can cause the elimination of animals' habitats and reduce the amount of oxygen which can be transformed from CO2 to oxygen by trees , especially in forests
. According to
statistics, the amount of deforestation in Iran has drastically increased which has caused the depletion ozone layer.
In conclusion, both deforestation and global warming can negatively make our habitat an inhospitable place. Due to
the huge amounts of harmful chemicals from cars and other vehicles, we should consider more priority for climate change.Submitted by bardiasoheilinezhad71 on
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