You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you found it difficult to work. Write your letter to the accommodation office at your college - Describe the situation - Explain your problems and why it is difficult to work - Say what kind of accommodation you prefer

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

letter regarding my current living conditions.

Although

the accommodation facility allotted to me is fine the real problem lies with my

roommate

. It has become impossible for me to study while sharing the room with him. I hope you will pay heed to my current predicament. Let me elaborate

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situation. It's been 3 months now when my

roommate

moved in. Previously I had no complaints regarding my old

roommate

as he was quite considerate. My current

roommate

however

quite opposite. He stays up all night and plays loud music making it impossible for me to sleep. Every day he is inviting friends over who make a lot of noise. His sense of hygiene is

also

a matter of great concern to me. I waste most of my time cleaning up his mess which leaves me less time to study. Would you be kind enough to transfer me or my

roommate

to another room? My preference would be to live with someone who is quieter and more considerate of others. Someone who

also

shares the responsibility of keeping the room clean. Thank you for your consideration. Yours faithfully,

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6 paragraphs

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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