Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information such as their hobbies and interests, and whether they are married or single. Some people say that this information may be relevant and useful. Others disagree. Discuss both these views and give own opinion

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into the recruitment process become a difficult topic in the interviews, due to
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opinions are divided regarding a its usefulness for the companies.
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, I would argue that private
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is so important and relevant for the organizations. A typical interview has a lot of questions about the personal life of people applying.
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, people said that the answers are lies. When job seekers are answering the questions, they try to impress with their comments in order to show good habits and emotional stability.
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, they said things like “I
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reading”, “I
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working
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animals”,
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, employers believe that they may be excellent workers. So,
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people are hired and generally they do not have discipline in their activities.
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, I think that the personal
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is too much useful. Currently, companies have created programs for the welfare of their employees.
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, Coca-Cola companies created a soccer championship because many workers
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to play soccer. As a consequence of
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, the company increased the quantity of the bottles made, because of that workers feel more confident, comfortable and concentrated so they have better performance.
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, the profit increased, and work accident decreased for the company. To sum up, all, questions about personal
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are relevant and useful for companies and employers, due to that the companies would have more knowledge to create wellness programs for their employees.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • job application
  • personal information
  • hobbies and interests
  • marital status
  • relevant
  • useful
  • privacy
  • assessing candidates
  • qualifications
  • experience
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