In many Countries, smoking is now illegal in public places. Many people believe that such a ban is justified. Do you agree or disagree?

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It is argued that the action of inhaling and exhaling the smoke of the tobacco or drug is considered as a crime at the present time for that reason
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activity is prohibited by many nations’ governments’ around the world.
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essay completely agrees with that statement because smoking the cause of many health problems and it create a wind
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. The act of smoking has injured our health the reason for
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the cigarette is toxin for human beings anatomy.
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, it is creating a problem in respiratory process and might be possible to cause a lung cancer.
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, By the survey of Indian government's medical department at 2009 in that 80% people were addicted for smoking weed or Drugs
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Compared with 60% men and women are suffering with health problems like Lung cancer, asthma, tuberculosis, etc.. . So, if governments' of many united ban on smoking in public place.
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, It is completely favourable and valuable decision. Smoking is one of the major reasons behind
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at public places because, the process of exhaling the smoke of a cigar is left into the wind
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will mix with normal
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after that create a pollute
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very harmful to human being as well as trees
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, Report of 2009 by the
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control department of Gujarat declared 20% people have suffered
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air pollution problems
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problem at railway station, parks, Bus station, etc. So, prohibited smoking at public locations by authority of states, It is good for the people.
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, For kids and senior citizens
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who has allergy with tobacco smoke. In conclusion, according to my view that statement, it is completely justified because the weed on public areas are not good for persons
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it can be made an
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • secondhand smoke
  • prevalence
  • respiratory issues
  • environmental pollution
  • litter
  • healthcare costs
  • smoking-induced illnesses
  • encourage smokers to quit
  • public health improvement
  • justified
  • public spaces
  • exposure
  • non-smokers
  • inconvenience
  • younger populations
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