Write a letter to landlord about the one or two problems you have in the house you moved to before 15 days with your family. What are issues and tell what you want him to do.

Dear Bill I am writing to you to inform you about an electrical hitch in my apartment that requires your cognizance. My parents have concerns about their safety measures and they are perturbed because we shifted here just before 2 weeks. Let me please allow

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elaborate on the problem

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going on. Actually, one of the yellow lights in the washroom does not work correctly

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and makes noise while operating. The reason why I would like to fix it immediately is not only hard to be in a restroom without enough light, but

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my parents are older who require a hazard-free facility. On top of that, a tap of washroom over the sink is leaking

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2 days;

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, the walls of

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the bathroom

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get more humidity than usual. Having

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asthma, a humid environment causes a glitch in my breathing. I request you to visit my home and check out what are the stumbling blocks we have and riddle it out as fast as you can. I would appreciate your attention and solution. Yours sincerely, Sarah