Write a letter to landlord about the one or two problems you have in the house you moved to before 15 days with your family. What are issues and tell what you want him to do.

Dear Bill I am writing to you to inform you about an electrical hitch in my apartment that requires your cognizance. My parents have concerns about their safety measures and they are perturbed because we shifted here just before 2 weeks. Let me please allow
to
Correct pronoun usage
you to
show examples
elaborate on the problem
that is
going on. Actually, one of the yellow lights in the washroom does not work correctly
,
Remove the comma
apply
show examples
and makes noise while operating. The reason why I would like to fix it immediately is not only hard to be in a restroom without enough light, but
also
my parents are older who require a hazard-free facility. On top of that, a tap of washroom over the sink is leaking
from
Change preposition
for
show examples
the
last
2 days;
consequently
, the walls of
bathroom
Correct article usage
the bathroom
show examples
get more humidity than usual. Having
an
Change the article
apply
show examples
asthma, a humid environment causes a glitch in my breathing. I request you to visit my home and check out what are the stumbling blocks we have and riddle it out as fast as you can. I would appreciate your attention and solution. Yours sincerely, Sarah
Submitted by black on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.
Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!
What to do next:
Look at other essays: