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When designing a building most important factor is intended use of the building rather than its outward appearance. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

#factor #appearance
It is advocated by some people that in the planning of any building utility and functioning are most imperative as compare to the external beauty. I believed that both have equally important outer beauty should be noticed before construction. I do acknowledge that why people say it would be great if buildings have a phenomenal design since voyager visits to see alluring buildings. Governments can
also
 earn a hefty amount of money by tourism as well as it provides employment to the local community.
For example
, as many buildings as Burj Khalifa, Taj Mahal, Kutub Minar and many more are extremely eminent among people all around the world, which is visited by many
travelers
a person who changes location
travellers
 and has been featured on various television programmes.
Besides
this
, other factors are needed as well,
such
 as construction of a house, it is often seen by people like how many rooms should be built and slots can be used for parking and many other factors are measured for a comfortable life. Having said that, it should not be forgotten that it may backfire as well. For a start, outer appearance is important as well because before purchasing a house and land it is always seen by people its external atmosphere,
however
 if one do not see these things and live at a congested place without good environment , may one can suffer from diseases, leading to which outer side should not be forgotten before buying a land.
Likewise
, when complexes, malls, medical and cosmetics shops are constructed surroundings become the prime priority Because if outside environment would not be market area, might be shops will earn limited. In summarize. I wrap it up, it would be no exaggeration to say that.
Although
 utilization and designing of a building play a paramount significant role in human's life, the value of external appearance should not be turned under minded.
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