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Some people fail in school, but end up being successful in life. Why do you think that is the case? What is the most important thing to succeed in life?

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Few people do not succeed in education, but end up being bloomed in
life
. One of the main reasons is that they have a creative
mind
, lack of attention in the studies failing in school. One of the most important things to achieve in
life
 is Peace.
Although
, few people do not have a blooming time in school, but they became successful in
life
, in my point of view one of the major reason behind
this
 is a creative
mind
, creative people usually do not find success in school-
life
, they do not pay enough attention to their studies,
for instance
, people like Bill Gates, Steve Jobs, they both failed in education but find a flourishing career in their
life
 which
also
 impact our lifestyles. Another main reason is that students find it difficult to bone up, and they end up being
demotivated
, the majority of the students have a problem in remembering too many answers. Even though there are many necessary things that we need in order to get a successful
life
, but the most important ingredient to be ahead of everyone is a peace of
mind
, no matter what your profession is whether you are a plumber, a doctor, an engineer, if you do not have a calm
mind
, you will not find success in your
life
.
Moreover
, calmness helps you to be more focused, motivated, it
also
 helps your body to relax. There is an old saying that health is wealth, good health is not possible without peace in
mind
. In conclusion, to get a flourished
life
people
Suggestion
person
 should have a creative
mind
 as well as a focused, and peaceful
mind
.
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