You are working for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your work. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter, you should: • describe why you want to take the course • explaining how it will be beneficial to company • tell who will be managing your work in your absence.

Dear John, I am writing
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available online by the institute named Simplilearn. As I am from
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background, so I found it to be
value adding
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to my current position. It not only makes you learn effective stakeholder management
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but
also
resource management and
also
it gives high revenue to the company. Let me explain
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in detail, the domain I am talking about allowing the opportunity to cut off on extra time and resources used and help in saving costs. There are several technical aspects and methodologies like Kaizen and Six Sigma that teaches how to keep an employee motivated and engaged in the project.
Moreover
, it guides how to retain the big projects. While, entering into a brand name, gives the path to represent an organization name in
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list, in earning chunk amount.
However
, it can only be possible if I get trained on the parameters.
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, I will be taking these classes for 2 hours daily. Though the professional course requires 32 hours of classes in a month, it can be managed
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weekends as well, but it will be so stressful. Once, I will be done with my work, I will leave early and will allocate the rest of the task to my subordinate So that the work doesn’t get hampered on weekdays.
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, the workload is less at the end of the day,
then
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I will keep myself available for urgency.
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would be grateful
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if you allow me to go for it. Hopefully, you will pay immediate attention to it. Best Regards, Urvashi
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

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Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

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  • firstly
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  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
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  • therefore
  • however
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  • despite

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