You are working for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your work. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter, you should: • describe why you want to take the course • explaining how it will be beneficial to company • tell who will be managing your work in your absence.
Dear John,
I am writing
this
letter to inform you about one of the project management professional training course
available online by the institute named Simplilearn. As I am from Fix the agreement mistake
courses
projects
background, so I found it to be Correct article usage
a projects
value adding
to my current position. It not only makes you learn effective stakeholder managementAdd a hyphen
value-adding
,
but Remove the comma
apply
also
resource management and also
it gives high revenue to the company.
Let me explain you
in detail, the domain I am talking about allowing the opportunity to cut off on extra time and resources used and help in saving costs. There are several technical aspects and methodologies like Kaizen and Six Sigma that teaches how to keep an employee motivated and engaged in the project. Change preposition
to you
Moreover
, it guides how to retain the big projects. While, entering into a brand name, gives the path to represent an organization name in top
list, in earning chunk amount. Add an article
the top
However
, it can only be possible if I get trained on the parameters.
Therefore
, I will be taking these classes for 2 hours daily. Though the professional course requires 32 hours of classes in a month, it can be managed in
weekends as well, but it will be so stressful. Once, I will be done with my work, I will leave early and will allocate the rest of the task to my subordinate So that the work doesn’t get hampered on weekdays. Change preposition
at
Also
, the workload is less at the end of the day, then
also
I will keep myself available for urgency. It
would be gratefulCorrect pronoun usage
I
,
if you allow me to go for it.
Hopefully, you will pay immediate attention to it.
Best Regards,
UrvashiRemove the comma
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- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
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