In the future, the main reason for going to shopping mall will be for entertainment, not to shop. do you agree or disagree?
Online shopping is ever increasing these days. People can purchase all items they need in the comfort of their home. It is agreed that people will go to shopping centres merely for having fun soon or late in coming years. They will Enjoy the entertainment activities the mall offers while they have a wide variety of options the online shops sell.
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Some people see shopping as a personalized experience where they can talk with the seller face to face, touch the fabrics and smell the spice. Accept space
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, many people are more eager to navigate the web and have a look at online shops all around the world. These shops give the customer the opportunity to compare goods prices and details quickly. Linking Words
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check the reviews, some more clicks and it will be delivered to my address in a few days without much effort.
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, shopping malls offer more and more pleasure activities from having a meal in a game centre for children. These are quite useful as there is not much option to spend spare time in crowded city centres. Linking Words
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, in the cold days of winter or in hot weather of summer you need to have some fun while the air conditioner keeping the atmosphere pleasant inside the malls. Linking Words
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, my friend takes her children to the shopping mall at weekends when she goes to a restaurant to have sushi with her daughter and his son enjoys watching speaking robot together with other pupils in Linking Words
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In summary, people will buy their items more and more through the web page and soon we witness more friends and families going to shop centres having their time of life. I don’t think the malls will be less crowded in the future.Linking Words
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