Some people think history has nothing or little to tell us, but others think that studying the past history can help us better understand the present. Please discuss the two views and give your own opinion.

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Nowadays, people remain divided over whether we should

study

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history

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. While some people believe that there isn’t anything to learn from the past, others argue that

history

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is a valuable source of information for us. I side with the latter. On the one hand, I understand why people think it is unprofitable to

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history

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, most of the information which we learn from the past is not useful in daily life and the

future

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. They are facts, dates, names, what happened in the past.

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, it is clear that most of the children in school don't interested in

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. They believe that the past is just past and there isn't any reason for studying the past

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they focus on science or technology

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more relevant to their jobs in the

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On the other hand

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, I would argue that we should

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history

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. It is clear that there are much knowledge and experience that we could learn from the past.

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, the same mistakes wouldn't be made again and again.

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, learn about the past often gives us a glimpse of the

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. It helps us have better views of the present and the

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but not least,

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history help

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history, help

people understand deeper about their country, their culture, what their ancestor experienced and did in the past. They

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learn about the cause and effect, so they would make the right choice in the

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, I believe that people would be better because they

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history

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. In conclusion,

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it has always been a controversial issue over whether people should

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, I firmly believe that

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plays an important role in people's education.

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Some people think history has nothing or little to tell us, but others think that studying the past history can help us better understand the present. Please discuss the two views and give your own opinion.

Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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Some people say that arts subjects such as painting or drawing should not be made compulsory for high school students. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Many people believe it's better to learn something new in a group than individually? Do you agree or disagree.

in many part of the world, children and teenagers are spending more and more of their time indoors. what do you think are causes of this problem? what measures could best be taken to solve it?