Write a letter to a travel agent expressing your dissatisfaction with their facilities due to a problem you had on a holiday.

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Dear Sir, I would like to bring the matter of

low quality

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travelling services about your company “Classic Cruise”, I recently went on the trip. I travelled

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Elizabeth 201, from 1st to 7th April, and I

shocked

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was shocked

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by not only the standard of accommodation

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but

also

the quality of the food.

To begin

with, the size and condition of my room disgusted me as it was tiny and filthy unlike “Deluxe cabins” the advertisement of your promises.

Moreover

, I did not

provided

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with

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my personal washroom

instead

of asking for a private washroom in

room

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the room

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;

hence

, I had to use the common facility – which bothered me all the time. What is more, the flavour of

food

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the food

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was so abominable that I got a digestive problem on

third

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day;

although

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your advertisement promised of

five star

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five-star

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restaurants and ambrosial in taste, the food was in fact of very poor quality. I feel

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I am entitled to get

full

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a full

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refund for the cost of the cruise and a written apology for the misinformation you advertised

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newspaper

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the newspaper

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. I look forward to hearing from you regarding

this

matter as soon as possible. Yours sincerely, Ryan

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