Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

It is often argued that
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violent scenes in films
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in
computer
and in video games are the main reasons for an increase in the number of crime in most of
countries
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the countries
of the world.I
complately
to a complete degree or to the full or entire extent
completely
disagree with
this
idea due to 2 main causes.
First
of all
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my own personal view is that
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there are other causes
for
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of
problem of raising the proportion of
crimes
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crime
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This
opinion is based on some statistical information.France is a prime
example which
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example, which
the incidence of crime is too high.In
this
developped
being changed over time so as to be e.g. stronger or more complete or more useful
developed
country the percentage of unemployment is too high and
that is
why most of population enter the life of crime.To be more precise
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poverty and being poor of life condition
effect
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affects
affect
the amount of illegal actions
such
as
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shop lifting
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pick-pocketing or rubbery.
Secondly
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children's phychology condition
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the child's psychology condition
children's psychology condition
child's psychology condition
child's phychology condition
is poor because they are not receiving enough attention from their parents in some countries.
As a result
of
this
situation
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they are becoming more free and starting doing banned actions.
For example
, nowadays most of young people spend their leisure times with social networking sites and some kind of these sites is the best way to attract people to dangerous crimes
such
as; terrorism and
religous
concerned with sacred matters or religion or the church
religious
extramism
any political theory favoring immoderate uncompromising policies
extremism
.
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Although
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many people believe that
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most number
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number
of people play
computer
games
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I still believe
computer
and video games are popular only among the children not other group of society. To conclude
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However
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computer
games and horror movies which are related to violence are found the causes of most of
crimes
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the crimes
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lack of money and illegal networking sites are the most important causes
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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