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and in video games are the main reasons for an increase in the number of crime in most of

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why most of population enter the life of crime.To be more precise

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poverty and being poor of life condition

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pick-pocketing or rubbery.

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they are becoming more free and starting doing banned actions.

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, nowadays most of young people spend their leisure times with social networking sites and some kind of these sites is the best way to attract people to dangerous crimes

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many people believe that

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games

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and video games are popular only among the children not other group of society. To conclude

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games and horror movies which are related to violence are found the causes of most of

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the crimes

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lack of money and illegal networking sites are the most important causes

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