The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads. Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

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Cars' ownership and number of cars have been increasing dramatically as in England, 29 million cars appeared only throughout 112 years. Some believe that there should be
encouragement
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encouraged
to alternative forms of
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and universal laws must be introduced to limit
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ownership and utilization. I moderately agree with
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claim as
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uncontrollable trend can bring unbearable consequences. Billions of cars
whish
interrogative pronoun, used both substantively and adjectivally, and in direct and indirect questions, to ask for, or refer to, an individual person or thing among several of a class
which
are used today were not existed 200 years ago. Unfortunately, each person in the world
tend
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tends
to buy their own
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. If a family was consisted of 4 members, they would own four vehicles.
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, public
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is always crowded.
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enormous number of cars affect negatively on the communities.
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number which produces
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an uncountable amount
of exhausts act as a lethal pollutant to the environment.
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, they are the main factor of crowded roads.
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, they might be a cause of depression for many people, especially poor persons.
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because rich communities always buy the latest versions of cars in the market.
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, that makes the people who cannot afford one feel that they are failures and become pessimistic.
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, that might distract youth and make them reap money to buy a
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rather than other essential items. That can influence petroleum price to increase and become
unaffordable
impossible to avoid or evade
unavoidable
affordable
by the persons who need it the most. Restricted laws which prevent the over-ownership of cars should be set and applied.
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, governments ought to ensure that each family has only one
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.
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, companies should enhance the group-ride which makes each group of people who are living close to each other travel together in one
car
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.
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, every person
have
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has
to start with himself to limit the
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usage, and the government should encourage people to use public
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instead
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of using their own cars. That should be done by improving the public
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and the other various forms. In conclusion, cars are increasing uncontrollably and that has negative consequences
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for
the entire world.
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, other different means of
transport
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should be encouraged and laws have to be applied to limit
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trend.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • reliance on
  • regulate
  • traffic congestion
  • pollution
  • public health
  • sustainable development
  • alternative forms of transport
  • car ownership
  • balancing benefits and drawbacks
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