In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?

Obesity is one of the serious
concern
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concerns
of
modern world
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the modern world
which in result is responsible for
numerious
amounting to a large indefinite number
numerous
health related problems.
Thus
,
this
is getting a hot debatable issue in many countries that how we can deter
this
serious issue. In my topic
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
will discuss both the root cause and strong measures that we can take to overcome
this
.
Firstly
,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
feel no regret to blame the advancement in technology for all health related diseases. As technology is flourishing by leaps and bounds it is capturing the youth and children in its shell. In
result people
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result, people
dont
do not
don't
prefere
like better; value more highly
prefer
preferred
to go out and play
instead
they prefer to play online games or making friends online.
Moreover
, less physical activity will lead people to gain extra weight. For an instance a research was done by university of
Toronto which
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Toronto, which
clearly shows that 62 percent of people prefers online gaming than going outside.
Secondly
, the other reason to blame is eating
habbits
an established custom
habits
. Children are more attracted towards street food or junk food which will increase their
calories
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calorie
intake and they attain stubborn fat which is hard to get rid of. Moving forward, there is no problem in
this
world that comes without solution.
Similarly
, in
this
case, people can go for
morning walk
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a morning walk
or create their diet plan. As, the best way to keep yourself fit is having a
balance
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balanced
diet and exercise.
Finally
, in conclusion, there is not denying the fact that we are in a serious problem of obesity and it can only be
eredicated
kill in large numbers
eradicated
with one's will and determination.
Submitted by Yogesh Sharma on

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sedentary
  • obesity
  • overweight
  • physical activity
  • sedentary lifestyle
  • exercise
  • unhealthy diet
  • fast food
  • urbanization
  • modernization
  • stress
  • awareness
  • education
  • government intervention
  • policies
  • promotion
  • sports
  • fitness programs
  • health education
  • taxation
  • public transportation
  • infrastructure
  • parks
  • recreational spaces
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