You eat at your college cafeteria every lunchtime. However, you think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the college magazine. In your letter: explain what you like bout the cafeteria say what is wrong suggest how it could be improved

Dear Sir, I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with our canteen hygiene and cleanliness.

Firstly

, I'm a big fan of a few of the items offered in our canteen in terms of their taste and the main item which I personally like is the grilled chicken club sandwich and the taste of the sandwich is top-notch,

this

is one of the main reason at least twice a week I will be visiting the cafeteria.

However

, I'm very disappointed with the management for not maintaining hygiene standards. The main reason for writing

this

letter is due to yesterday's incident, as I was served with the sandwich which has uncooked chicken. Though it is the

first

time I have experienced

this

situation for the past two years. I would suggest there should be an investigation

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. I would

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make a suggestion to higher officials to conduct food inspections on a daily basis to make sure the guidelines are followed.

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way we can make sure cooked and fresh food is served to all the students. Yours sincerely, Teja