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The bar chart illustrates information related to the world populace per cent and issuance of
wealth
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by sector. It is clear, that North America has the highest global
wealth
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standing at 32%, followed by Europe & Rich Asia- Pacific contributed by 30- 24 per cent respectively. India and Africa somewhat have similar, global
wealth
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standing by 1 % respectively. We can see that, countries like China, Other Asia-Pacific and America &
Caribean
region including the Caribbean Islands
Caribbean
falling
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fall
are falling
under 5% in
world
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worldly
wealth
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. Looking to Population, China is the highest among all the countries, standing by 24%, rest other countries those are less populated,
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as Africa, America & Caribean, North America and Rich-Asia Pacific, which accounted under 10%, It can be observed, that less than fifth countries, who have similar population ratio, are India, Other- Asia pacific & Europe. Overall, in terms of global
wealth
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, North America has the highest among all the 8 countries, whereas, the least in India.
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, the rate of population is the highest in China and lowest in Rich- Asia Pacific. The units are measured in percentages.
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