The advances in air travel are focused only in the first class and this seems to have left others with no benefits at all? Do you agree or dissgree?

Some think that the

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passengers are given all the advanced technology and comfort during their travel while the other passengers do not get any benefits. In my opinion, I believe that all the innovation and comfort during an air travel is concentrated on the

business

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seats leaving the other passengers with limited options.

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, I think that airlines concentrate more

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in

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as they pay more

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appropriate to; intended for

for

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, most of the attention is seeked by

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passengers,

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as, specially designed seats with back rests, extra leg space, washroom facilities and variety of foods all at the cost of other passengers because the plane size is limited and to get all

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extra luxuaries for the

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class

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they have to squeeze the economy

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, which is left with mere crumbled seat and some options of food.

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, television is installed along with all desired

channels one

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channels, one

can think of while in a flight, along with

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, specially designed beds and curtains. Another reason that other passengers in a plane are neglected while they

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advances is the variety of food they get whilst travelling. To illustrate, as the economy passengers only have some options to choose from a

menue

a list of dishes available at a restaurant

menu

, on

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the contrary

the

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is offered all the courses along with

deserst

a dish served as the last course of a meal

dessert

desserts

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,

this

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can sometimes be customised,

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concentrating on the

luxuary

something that is an indulgence rather than a necessity

luxury

items

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the aviation industry only provides basic

nessicites

the condition of being essential or indispensable

necessities

to others

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travelling by air has changed and is a better

experience but

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experience, but

mostly for

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. In conclusion, I think that

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there are few

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seats

in

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on

a flight, still most of the focus of the attendants as well as

the the

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the

flight authorities is on their comfortable journey of its

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rather than

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the rest

of

passengers

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the passengers

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