Some people think sending criminals to prison is not an effective way to deal with them. Education and training are better. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
These days, the question of whether prisons or
ehabilitation
programs are better in dealing with offenders has been receiving a great deal of public attention. the restoration of someone to a useful place in society
rehabilitation
Although
prisons are not without advantages, I strongly believe that education
and training are more effective.
On the one hand, imprisoning law-breakers
can offer several benefits. someone who violates the law
lawbreakers
lawbreakers'
lawbreaker's
Firstly
, since people are isolated from the society for a long period of time, this
allows them time to learn that unlawful actions have consequences. Therefore
, they would not dare to reoffend
when being released, bringing peace and safety to the whole community. cause to feel resentment or indignation
offend
Secondly
, it is true that serious crimes such
as murderers should be in confined spaces to prevent further
life losses. In fact, these criminals may be beyond redemption as they are too cruel to deprive innocent people of their own life. (
Accept space
(
deprive
someone of something: tước đi của Suggestion
Deprive
ai
cái gì).
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On the other hand
, rehabilitation projects are of greater importance. (phải khẳng định là nó tốt hơn nha). To begin
with, for prisoners who have committed petty crime such
as burglars or stealing without harming others, vocational training can help them become better citizens later on. In fact, with proper education
, these wrongdoers can accquire
personal skills and specific job skills which can assist them in entering the job market after being released and start a new life, which is more ethical. come into the possession of something concrete or abstract
acquire
Furthermore
, it is true that some people commit crime without any awareness, in this
case, education
is crucial. For example
, in Vietnam, drug dealers tend to induce (dụ dỗ) young children to innocently deliver drug
. Suggestion
drugs
This
means that the lack of knowlege
can drive many kids to be guilty; the psychological result of perception and learning and reasoning
knowledge
therefore
, education
can open a chance for these offenders to be conscious about illegal activities and avoid making the same mistake again.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that the best solution to cope with criminals is to educate and train them to be better residents. By considering the pros and cons of each method, the authority could solve the problem of crime in a short time.Submitted by hothaonguyen.2512 on
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