Some people think sending criminals to prison is not an effective way to deal with them. Education and training are better. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

These days, the question of whether prisons or
ehabilitation
the restoration of someone to a useful place in society
rehabilitation
programs are better in dealing with offenders has been receiving a great deal of public attention.
Although
prisons are not without advantages, I strongly believe that
education
and training are more effective. On the one hand, imprisoning
law-breakers
someone who violates the law
lawbreakers
lawbreakers'
lawbreaker's
can offer several benefits.
Firstly
, since people are isolated from the society for a long period of time,
this
allows them time to learn that unlawful actions have consequences.
Therefore
, they would not dare to
reoffend
cause to feel resentment or indignation
offend
when being released, bringing peace and safety to the whole community.
Secondly
, it is true that serious crimes
such
as murderers should be in confined spaces to prevent
further
life losses. In fact, these criminals may be beyond redemption as they are too cruel to deprive innocent people of their own life.
(
Accept space
(
deprive
Suggestion
Deprive
someone of something: tước đi của
ai
Suggestion
AI
a
cái gì).
On the other hand
, rehabilitation projects are of greater importance. (phải khẳng định là nó tốt hơn nha).
To begin
with, for prisoners who have committed petty crime
such
as burglars or stealing without harming others, vocational training can help them become better citizens later on. In fact, with proper
education
, these wrongdoers can
accquire
come into the possession of something concrete or abstract
acquire
personal skills and specific job skills which can assist them in entering the job market after being released and start a new life, which is more ethical.
Furthermore
, it is true that some people commit crime without any awareness, in
this
case,
education
is crucial.
For example
, in Vietnam, drug dealers tend to induce (dụ dỗ) young children to innocently deliver
drug
Suggestion
drugs
.
This
means that the lack of
knowlege
the psychological result of perception and learning and reasoning
knowledge
can drive many kids to be guilty;
therefore
,
education
can open a chance for these offenders to be conscious about illegal activities and avoid making the same mistake again. In conclusion, I am of the opinion that the best solution to cope with criminals is to educate and train them to be better residents. By considering the pros and cons of each method, the authority could solve the problem of crime in a short time.
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